He is good at play the violin.In New York,there is a lot of rains in spring.

He is good at playing the violin.( play-> playing,介词后接动词ING形式)
In New York,there is a lot of rain in spring.( rains-> rain 不可数名词)
Yang Ling didn’t go to bed early last night.( doesn't -> didn't ,因为LAST NIGHT昨晚已过去)
I want to buy an interesting book about animals.(of-> about 关于 )

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