写的英语句子不知道有没有什么问题,求修改~一定要改得正确没有语法、拼写等错误

There is no doubt that more attention must be paid to the issue of employment for graduates.
In other words,more and more people are now realizing that it is difficult for the graduates to find jobs.
There are two reasons for this situation:firstly,the number of graduates is much larger than the number of job vacacies; secondly,some graduates do not want to work immediately after graduation.

更多阅读